We are all closets hiding ghosts but it's our bones they rattle. The hardest part isn't letting them speak, I don't think. Maybe it's listening to them. Beautifully written.
Maybe I’m misunderstanding but it seems to me that you are able to write about your own dishonestly in a way that is incredibly honest. Do I have that right?
I like the narrative voice, the emotional range, and how details blend into the story to create atmosphere. It's a really imaginative one. Beautifully written.
Well done. Love, sex, and marriage often never meet at the same intersection, yet we want our internal GPS of emotions to find it. It's an arduous task.
We are all closets hiding ghosts but it's our bones they rattle. The hardest part isn't letting them speak, I don't think. Maybe it's listening to them. Beautifully written.
Rattling bones. Like snakes tails and infestations. Yes.
Maybe I’m misunderstanding but it seems to me that you are able to write about your own dishonestly in a way that is incredibly honest. Do I have that right?
I like the narrative voice, the emotional range, and how details blend into the story to create atmosphere. It's a really imaginative one. Beautifully written.
Thank you.
Well done. Love, sex, and marriage often never meet at the same intersection, yet we want our internal GPS of emotions to find it. It's an arduous task.